Given this week’s research focus, reading about writing, and the consensus that most theorists acknowledge the link between strong readers and strong writers, today’s blog first will contextualize pertinent literature before applying the concepts to an online think-aloud of an advertisement by ED in ’08 that appeared in a recent (July 9, 2008) edition of The New Republic.
The National Writing Project’s Because Writing Matters (2006) defines literacy as the ability to read and write, noting, “the two are best learned together” (60). But this concept is nothing new. Pioneering teacher-researcher and writing process proponent Donald Murray (1990) writes, “You can read without writing, but you can’t write without reading,” (115).
Traveling back in time 28 years, Paul A. Eschholz (1980) was writing about the reading and writing connection in the teaching of English, arguing that combining the two in a Prose Models Approach to classroom instruction would be more effective than traditional approaches, because “[i]n reading, writers see the printed word; they develop an eye – and an ear – for language, the shape and order of sentences, and the texture of paragraphs,” (21). To demonstrate his point, Eschholz looks to professional writers as his standard, “Professional writers have long acknowledged the value of reading; they know that what they read is important to how they eventually write,” (21). So, it makes sense that teachers might model what they do in the classroom based on how writing happens in the real world.
And that means teaching writing as a process, a concept that does not always mesh with the administrivia facing those in the teaching profession, where assignments must be assessed and grades must be posted every six weeks, a task often discordant with the recursive nature of writing. Sondra Perl (1990) explains the process of writing as one in which, “…we begin with what is inchoate and end with something that is tangible. In order to do so, we both discover and construct what we mean … In writing, meaning cannot be discovered the way we discover an object on an archaeological dig. In writing, meaning is crafted and constructed. It involves us in a process of coming-into-being,” (49).
Perl’s “coming-into-being” applies to much more than the writing process. It is a metaphor for change. Politically, writing process theory marks a shift in both teaching philosophy and teacher role. While it undoubtedly shifted the focus away from prescribed writing to inquiry-based writing, it also reflects a cultural transition that emphasizes the importance of the individual. Classroom philosophies needed to adapt to reflect this paradigm shift in the larger society. The political function was to present a shift in the guise of what Thomas Newkirk calls “anti-institutional bias” (xvi). Perhaps its real purpose was to effect a dumbing down of traditional writing’s focus on the higher-level critical thinking skills required for academic writing to one that still focused on literacy and expression, yet fulfilled society’s goal of producing a literate work force while minimizing the threat to its institutions. In other words, by shifting from writing based on analysis to writing based on personal experience, politicians need not worry about the masses becoming an insurgent threat to their power base. A radical idea, even considering that process writing, when implemented correctly by teachers, draws students to use critical thinking skills, something lacking in the current test-prep focused system.
Actually, one might argue that the traditional method of English instruction, where the teacher disseminates information to the students, prescribing topics for writing, also served a political function. In the beginning of the 20th century, when “[t]he effects of the social efficiency movement on classroom teaching practices in high school English courses” (Berlin 193) were beginning to be realized, many English courses were developed that ignored literature altogether, instead emphasizing high school as a place for job training where writing instruction could be restricted and used merely for “utilitarian and vocational” purposes, “without regard for the personal or political life of the student” (Berlin 194). Now, in the 20th century, our needs are much different, requiring a work force with skills beyond an 8th or even 12th grade education, levels that were sufficient for much of the 20th century’s industrialized society.
Furthermore, to change the structure of the outdated current system, one that emphasized rote learning, will not be possible without getting everyone on board, from students to parents to teachers to administrators to state and federal government. Whether educational or otherwise, change never happens without resistance, and playing the blame game is not going to solve the problem. All interested parties must work together to effect positive change. And, as Jerome Bruner writes, “[e]ducation is risky, for it fuels the sense of possibility. But a failure to equip minds with the skills for understanding and feeling and acting in the cultural world is not simply scoring a pedagogical zero. It risks creating alienation, defiance, and practical incompetence. And all of these undermine the viability of a culture,” (42-23).
Change that attempts to be implemented in the writing classroom is thwarted by the current emphasis on testing, leaving the efforts of conscientious teachers thwarted. Do teachers follow what they know to be sound pedagogy, refusing to focus on the test, or do they give in to administrative pressure? While writing process teacher-researchers like Nancie Atwell and Murray suggest teachers have students write daily, attempting many writings and choosing some for further development, mimicking the professional writer’s process, they also assert that teachers should not assess every piece of writing, advocating for portfolios that contain several student-selected writings that teachers use to assess progress when grades are due. This philosophy in the teaching of writing allows students to craft and construct meaning, as Perl says, resulting in students using higher-order thinking skills – the critical thinking skills that many of our students lack because they are not afforded the opportunity to “com[e]-into-being.”
But does the typical structure of the American high school allow time for discovery in writing? It can and it does. Does an already-packed curriculum that, in many cases, focuses on standardized test preparation allow for this new-age touchy-feely discovery? Sadly again, what teachers know to be good practice in the teaching of writing is being compromised by the push to teach not only artificial forms like the five paragraph essay (FPE) that tend to score well on writing tests, but also “facts” about writing, where the correct answer is one of five choices presented to students in a list.
Where outside of misguided K-12 classrooms is the FPE used? The answer is that it is not. In fact, First Year Composition (FYC) college writing instructors spend much of their time deprogramming the damage done to students in American middle and high schools.
Where in the real world do people take multiple-choice examinations in the workplace? The answer is they do not.
As a result, this begs the question, “Why are we doing this to our students?”
The most consistent response is because we need to “raise the bar” and institute “standards” to address the “education crisis” America is experiencing. Interestingly, if you look through the literature, Americans have perceived deficiencies in its educational system for the last hundred and fifty years, making myriad adjustments in order to rise to its status of economic power in the 20th century. David Brooks cites Claudia Goldin and Lawrence Katz’s The Race Between Education and Technology in his recent article addressing America’s education crisis, noting that education levels in the United States steadily improved between 1870 and 1950, rising far above those of its industrialized competitors. Goldin and Katz mark 1970 as the year “educational progress slowed to a crawl,” with “educational attainments stagnat[ing] completely” between 1975 and 1990 (Brooks A19).
What happened?
We are now in a situation where workers do not possess the skills necessary to fill jobs that require technical knowledge, so jobs are being shipped overseas and the gap between skilled and unskilled workers in the United States is becoming more pronounced, resulting in an ever-widening gap between the rich and the poor. Brooks points to a study by University of Chicago researcher James Heckman, “Schools, Skills, and Synapses,” that argues the problem of decline in American high school graduation rates seen since the late 1960s, when it reached its peak, is not a result of a lack of funding or failing schools, but a result of the deterioration of the family seen over the last 40 years.
In that time, we have seen an economic shift where, in order to achieve the ideals of the American dream, both parents must work, leaving children without a built-in support system – a mother or father at home (something single-parent families also face). With parents at work, students are left to fend for themselves, trying to make sense of life without very much guidance. Some make it, but others do not. Since 1970, we have seen a rise in television viewing and the phenomenon of television as babysitter, giving our children misguided views. The language, violence and sexuality presented on television – not to mention commercial saturation attempting to persuade viewers that they need just about everything – has become more commonplace. Juvenile problems have increased. Prisons are overcrowded. Upon returning from work, guilt-ridden parents shower their progeny with gifts instead of spending quality time with them because, frankly, they are just too tired. Instead of focusing on homework, it’s much easier to play a video game and eat processed foods without a parent present to moderate activities. This reallocation of priorities has translated into a common view, undoubtedly based on the adult’s day at work, that schoolwork should not leave school and home is for relaxing and getting away from the demands that work/school place on us. It is not uncommon in today’s high schools to hear, “I don’t do homework, because I’m at school all day long and no one is paying for me to do work at home.”
Somewhere along the way, things got screwed up. The entitlement philosophy that emerged from the Me Generation of the 1970s not only persists today, but has created multiple generations who ask what their country (and everyone else) can do for them. American society has become a victim of itself. While many attempt to play the blame game, pointing to schools as the root cause of decline in education, we would be remiss not to also consider plethora social factors that affect our students’ motivation and ability to perform – beginning in the home. That’s one of the reasons why it’s upsetting when groups such as ED in ’08, a self-described group advocating for Strong American Schools supported by The Eli and Edythe Broad Foundation and the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation, take it upon themselves bash public education. Their full-page color advertisement appearing on the back page of The New Republic’s July 9, 2008 issue will serve as the starting point for my “dialogue with the text” (see Louise Rosenblatt’s Reader-Response Theory if you are intrigued).
The focal point for the advertisement is a young, blue-eyed female holding a pencil to paper, looking at the camera above as if she worn out, the victim of traditional education. Beneath her is large text – all caps – that reads “A NATION STILL AT RISK” in black lettering, with the exception of “STILL,” which is in yellow for emphasis. To the left of the unfortunate girl is the following: “BY 8TH GRADE, NEARLY 70% OF STUDENTS ARE BELOW PROFICIENT IN READING. MOST WILL NEVER CATCH UP.” This text is all white except for “70%” (which appears not only larger than the other text, for emphasis, but also in yellow) and “BELOW PROFICIENT” (again, in yellow). My first response is to ask the source of the information. Though my guess would be NAEP, the source is not cited. I would also like to know the scale so “proficiency” can be defined. On what test was this proficiency established? Was it multiple choice? What did the reading passages look like? Most standardized tests are biased toward upper class white people. How did socioeconomic status figure in? Race? Gender? These are all important for being able to contextualize such a statement.
Beneath “A NATION STILL AT RISK” are two statements (black text with yellow text to highlight particular sections) represented as separate paragraphs. I’ll consider these one at a time:
“TWENTY-FIVE YEARS AFTER A NATION AT RISK WAS WRITTEN, OUR SCHOOLS ARE STILL STRUGGLING WITH A MEDIOCRE EDUCATION SYSTEM THAT CONTINUES TO FAIL OUR CHILDREN BY NOT PROVIDING THEM WITH THE SKILLS NEEDED TO SUCCEED IN THE GLOBAL WORKFORCE.” The word “still” is italicized, “mediocre education system” is in yellow, as is “continues to fail our children.” To focus on the yellow text, we have a mediocre education system that continues to fail our children. My initial reaction is that no system, especially one that attempts to educate everyone, can be 100% successful. By the same token, is our current system perfect? Absolutely not. But, as the ad implies, it does not fail all of our children. Whom does it fail? If you go back up to the 70%, then it’s failing 7 of 10 students. See the above comment regarding that. What are the skills necessary to succeed? Can all of these be learned at school, at a place a child attends for 6 hours a day, five days a week, and nine months a year? What are children doing when they are not in school, which constitutes the majority of their time? Are parents encouraging them to turn off the TV and the video games and actually practice reading? The average American student spends a minimum of 4-6 hours a day in front of a screen. Reading and writing are skills that get better only with practice. While the system may not be perfect, the support systems outside of the 30-hours of school time must support school endeavors. What is happening in school and at home in the 24 nations who are beating us in mathematics and 20 countries that are beating us in science? Are they doing it based on a six-hour school day with no follow-up beyond school hours? Do foreign students expect to be paid for their time studying after school? Do they consider non-school time “free time”, or are they studying, reading, and reinforcing what they’ve learned during the day?
“WHEN AMERICAN STUDENTS GET BEAT FOR THE BEST JOBS AVAILABLE, OUR ECONOMY SUFFERS, IMPACTING EACH AND EVERY ONE OF US.” Again, “American students get beat for the best jobs” and “impacting each and every one of us” appear in yellow text. Are all of our jobs being sent overseas because our students are not skilled? What about foreign workers who do technical work for less money than Americans will? People in the United States are still living according to industrial revolution standards, where a minimal education was sufficient to attain a middle class lifestyle. This is no longer the case. When this attitude changes, and it has to start in the home, we will see Americans attaining higher levels of education. I’m thinking to myself, “How did Ireland change its economy?” What are the standards for education in Europe? In Germany, students, depending on aptitude, are funneled into trade schools, business schools, or college prep schools when they reach their teens, providing a concentrated focus for study. In America, we lump all of our students into one class, where oftentimes teachers teach to the average student, resulting in struggling students and smart students being left behind. In America, tracking has become a bad word in education. What if we had a system similar to Germany’s? What do the Japanese do? The Chinese? While the economy impacts all of us, and we are now in a recession, the reason is not because American students are getting beat for the best jobs. That is reductionist thinking. Does the society suffer when it does not take care of all of its members? Absolutely. Any change in skill attainment will not be seen until other areas are addressed proactively in combination with reworking mass education.
The ad ends with: “STRONG AMERICAN SCHOOLS REFUSES TO ACCEPT MEDIOCRITY. WE CANNOT WAIT ANOTHER 25 YEARS TO ACT.” All black text. I couldn’t agree more. A public school product, I do not accept mediocrity, either. We’re on the same page. But I also believe that my public education was excellent. When I had the occasional teacher who was not effective, I had the wherewithal to read the texts and educate myself. My family supported my education and encouraged me to go to college. My father paid me for achieving good grades in high school (I gladly took the cash, though it wasn’t much, never telling him that I loved the challenge of school). What makes me different? My dad took a few college classes, my mom went to cosmetology school after high school. Dad worked on the line for an automobile manufacturer, mom stayed at home. We ate all of our meals together on the weekends, and we all ate dinner together each afternoon at 3:45pm (When dad arrived home, mom had the meal waiting. We said a prayer, ate, talked about our days, then read the newspaper after.) Even though he never finished college, dad always said an education was the best thing you could have in this world. While I was rebellious as a teen, like many, I always finished my work first. To this day, I work hard and then play hard. When I see some of my students lacking in motivation, I wonder how I can give them what I – and few others in my class – have. What is the difference?
At the bottom appears the following: http://www.edin08.com/ .
Works Cited
Berlin, James. “Writing Instruction in School and College English, 1890-1985. from A Short History of Writing Instruction. ed. James J. Murphy. Davis, CA: Hermagoras Press, 1990. 184-220.
Brooks, David. “The Biggest Issue.” The New York Times. 29 July 2008. A19.
Bruner, Jerome. The Culture of Education. Cambridge, MA: Harvard University Press, 1996.
Eschholz, Paul A. “The Prose Models Approach: Using Products in the Process.” Eight Approaches to Teaching Composition. Eds. Timothy R. Donovan and Ben W. McClelland. Urbana, IL: NCTE, 1980. 21-36.
Murray, Donald. “Teaching the Other Self: The Writer’s First Reader.” To Compose: Teaching Writing in High School and College, Second Edition. Ed. Thomas Newkirk. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 1990. 113-123.
National Writing Project and Carl Nagin. Because Writing Matters: Improving Student Writing in Our Schools. San Francisco, CA: Jossey-Bass, 2006.
Newkirk, Thomas. To Compose: Teaching Writing in High School and College, Second Edition. Ed. Thomas Newkirk. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 1990.
Perl, Sondra. “Understanding Composing.” To Compose: Teaching Writing in High School and College, Second Edition. Ed. Thomas Newkirk. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 1990. 43 – 51.